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Two Oldies go walking in the winter sun

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Today a walk
in the winter sun
Zoe on a skate board
dog on the run
Jimmie swings past us
laughing his glee
His mother calls careful
seeing white hair
“Old folks have the right-of-way
boys ride with care.”
And we know
the next generation
is going to be just fine.

Written by cronelogical

July 6, 2008 at 8:45 am

Posted in Art

8 Responses

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  1. Fran I didn’t need the painting I am looking at a photo of you and Jim on my mantlepiece and can easily picture your white heads out in the winter sun .
    Perhaps a gliitter of grey between the white locks that adds to the distinction of being
    given the well earned title of ” Crone”…woman and man…..Sund 6.7.08

    Lois ( Muse of the Sea)

    lois (aka Druscilla)

    July 6, 2008 at 11:37 am

  2. Oh, Frances, this is great. Your painting and words meld together so beautifully.

    Vi

    woodnymph

    July 6, 2008 at 2:06 pm

  3. love the vibrant color in the painting – and the hopeful attitude for the next gen…I am finding it harder to believe in them some days

    kvwordsmith

    July 6, 2008 at 4:22 pm

  4. Absolutely enchanting, Fran.

    imogen88

    July 7, 2008 at 12:13 pm

  5. This is going to be one of my favorite paintings—I love the deep, rich darks. Just lovely!

    porchsitter

    July 7, 2008 at 1:58 pm

  6. Your style is so distinctive Fran. Lovely!

    Heather Blakey

    July 8, 2008 at 2:57 pm

  7. The illustration is so lovely!

    pearlz

    July 9, 2008 at 12:39 am

  8. wow–between the painting and the poetry I really do think things will be just fine with everything…..thank you

    Raven

    July 12, 2008 at 2:41 pm


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