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Neruda Rain

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Rain today,

out of the blue,

warm winds brought

rare rain,

Neruda rain,

words in the

clouds,

coming through.

Writing Prompt – Heather Blakey’s Neruda Challenge on Squidoo

(copyright Imogen Crest 2008.)

Written by imogen88

May 17, 2008 at 5:49 am

12 Responses

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  1. How lovely, I love that image of words raining down – so evocative.

    Jill

    May 17, 2008 at 12:44 pm

  2. Nice!

    jodhiay

    May 17, 2008 at 12:56 pm

  3. Imogen — Ahhhh, sweet words of rain coming through. Genece

    espirit07

    May 17, 2008 at 12:58 pm

  4. “Neruda rain” – I love the sound of those syllables, and the image of words sprinkling, drizzling, pouring down on a parched paper – Pablo would be proud!

    Kerry

    May 17, 2008 at 1:12 pm

  5. The beauty of your words are in their simplicity. So well done.

    Vi

    woodnymph

    May 17, 2008 at 2:44 pm

  6. Neruda rain–lovely. :-)

    porchsitter

    May 17, 2008 at 4:24 pm

  7. Neruda has shed many tears over the saddest of lines that have been induced and bought much rain to the source :-)

    Heather Blakey

    May 17, 2008 at 11:49 pm

  8. This evokes such a simple but powerful image in my mind!

    Lori

    May 18, 2008 at 3:32 am

  9. Heather:
    “Neruda has shed many tears over the saddest of lines that have been induced and bought much rain to the source” — that’s poetry in the short form!

    Thank you, everyone! It really feels like Neruda is fertile like rain!

    imogen88

    May 18, 2008 at 12:16 pm

  10. I live in the rich volcanic area of the Western District of Victoria in Australia. We have been declared a drought area for 12 months or more but several days ago, we had strong winds and then much needed heavy rain. So how appropriate your lines are for me.

    murcha

    May 19, 2008 at 11:32 am

  11. Great to hear, Anne! What a blesssing that rain was! ;-)

    imogen88

    May 19, 2008 at 2:14 pm

  12. What a lovely little gem this poem is!

    shewolfy728

    May 19, 2008 at 2:38 pm


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